All Comments on 'The Pandora Effect Ch. 07'

Very exciting, beautifully written.

Thank you for not making the story weird with too much of the angels and succubus.

Saying I'm relieved is a good thing. With you at the key pad and my name being mentioned, who knows where you might take me.....instead you brought Wolfie back...awww my Wolfie.....hehe-he. The story is progressing nicely and I like the twist of where the clue came from....a civilian tops your Seals...hehe-he...but really you have continued the flow of the action and that's really what Kevin's story has been about. So until the next installment....happy writing...

Excellent story,im not usually into the miitary stuff,but it was a wonderful combination and look forward to more from you,,,,and i thought the servers name was Nancy,not karen,that was so smitten with bob,keep up the good work,,wish it had a 10 star button!!!,

Yep, I can always count on the readers to keep me straight. Even after four look overs, we still miss things. Thanks for the help on name change, it has been corrected. I guess we all got caught up in the storyline. Thanks again.

This is a really fun story. Sorry you are not getting enough views. Not a lot of sex, but great suspense, and for your faithful; keep on reading and voting. Let's support our really good writers. XD

Thinking that perhaps Jake and Kevin need some way to distinguish their wolves as friendly. Perhaps oversize bandanas or something of the sort that will stay on even if they change to wolf form.