All Comments on 'The Paper Ch. 03'

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boaman007boaman007almost 9 years ago
Excellent

I love the fact that you recognized there was unfinished business and you took care of it. I wouldn't mind seeing another installment with these characters? Thanks for another great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
****

Good story. Maybe a tad overwritten though it's a very fine line between just right and exaggeration.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Its now time for Kevin to face his Mom in bed, kiss her good and screw her even better than good. Let her see his face as he cums into her and visa-versa...... let her feel his big cock pulse with every hard squirt and fill her.

I think this story can be nice and Hot - very good start. Thank you !

BoiPussyBoiPussyalmost 9 years ago
Damn

Very good! I like it when an Author leaves some detail for the imagination, some over kill with strict sizes and the like. Keep it simple stupid. :D

kaidmankaidmanabout 8 years ago
dynamite work

I loved this set hope to see another installment I feel there is more to the tale I am also curious as to whether kevin is in class with david or shelly for this calculus final it would be funny if him and dave meet and realize each other has had incest

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 8 years ago
Please add more to both the stories.

The Wilson's and the Jones's.

ken0001ken0001almost 8 years ago
Eric has the right idea!

Yes get these two families together. Minus husbands of course.

OlebillOlebillabout 7 years ago
Fantastic

Could stop reading. Add more to both families.

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