All Comments on 'The Parade Pt. 02'

by Paperpiece

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Another case of a straight man turned once he finds how wonderful m2m sex is. It really wont be long until he gives up Terresa. I can relate to his feelings. The same thing happened to me. I soon realized that I was a cum loving cock sucking fagot slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot as hell

58, MWM but damn this was hot. Loved part 1 too. I'll be looking at the kilt wearing men at the St. Patrick's Day parade Saturday in Savannah differently now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great writing

I would enjoy your writing even if there was no sex in it. You have quite a gift. I think you’re the best.

PaperpiecePaperpieceabout 6 years agoAuthor

Anonymous 1 — thank you! I’m thrilled that my writing style is being viewed as favorable.

Anonymous 2 — keep those eyes open. Let’s your imagination wander at your next parade.

Anonymous 3 — it’s doubtful that the main character will outright leave Teresa. 1)He loves Teresa. Even if cock has a powerful sway over him, he still wants to love her. 2)The older man told him how it’d be, how the main character would continue to live the “illusion.”

Thanks for the responses,

Sincerely, Paperpiece.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OMG

this story is so fucking hot, ive fantasized about being taken or groped like that in public, please write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Xlent

Love stories like this....well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Brilliant

God this story is truly a gift - there is nothing hotter than reading stories like these. Well being a straight guy makes reading them way hotter. Keep it up please keep going - I NEED more :)

txboyalonetxboyaloneabout 6 years ago
Hot Rocks

Great story makes me want to be his pussy boy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yes!!!

Soooo hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This story is so hot!!! You’re a great writer!

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11almost 6 years ago
I love Straight guys who get fucked!

I really enjoyed your story "The Parade". In my favorite stories, and in the few I've written, there is some sense of shame and humiliation when the main character's oral or anal submissiveness is discovered by friends, relatives, coworkers, etc. If you write again, can you consider some such elements?

Don

JP0920JP0920almost 6 years ago

I love your writing!! so hot! love these stories where straight guys get dominated by older guys

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Agree with txboyalone.

Makes me want to be his pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

The sex and domination are very hot. Love the submissive side of this straight guy, and that he is still into his gf but can't help but return to the man.

Would enjoy reading this series more

BeastofbothworldsBeastofbothworldsover 4 years ago
Pt. 3 Please!

this is such a good story and one that i keep coming back to. I would really really enjoy reading a third part.

lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAabout 4 years ago
That was hot..

Wow I liked that.

liz33ndliz33ndover 3 years ago
Sexy fun read

Make him admit and beg

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