All Comments on 'The Parking Garage'

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Yeah, this needs a follow-up. Really interested in these two-they need to meet up again!

Enjoyed The characterization of the lady is very rich and robust. Keep writing.

Thanks

The fact that shes "in her early 30s" and contemplating getting cats. Sorry But that's a huge turn off for some reason despite the hot description of How she looks. Idk but I couldn't get past that.

And not different enough in content for its length, alas.

–AJ

Liked it, but felt it needed more tension. She really didn't seem very upset or afraid, in fact I thought it was going to end up being someone she knew.

Looking forward to more!

I found it thrilling. You have tapped into my innermost thoughts.

And yes, I have cats !!!

I appreciate all the comments and have given thought to each and every one. This is the first story I have ever completed, so I am very much a novice. It has been a great experience so far and I am working on my next. Thank you for reading and for the input!

For the most part I enjoyed it, good job. I do agree about the cat comment - yes, she's too young for that and I also agree about it being a little long after the sex ended. It's better if she was just left in the parking lot - sated and breathless wondering what had just happened. Well done though, good theme and good writing.

... I think every man has had a fantasy of taking a woman and her responding with passion and need, but it's just a fantasy, even though it was a well written one. Panther Fan.

Very well written and arousing