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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ended to Quickly

You almost had a 5. After laying in bed, they would reflect what just happened. Woyld it happen again? How often and under what circumstances? What would she tell her friend and how would the experience influence future encounters with men their age? Or would Ashley be hooked and be connected to this older man, recognizing that the men her age were just extended adolescents, boys who don't understand relationship. Keep working.

olblueyesolblueyesover 6 years ago
ugh.

he created a monster.

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