All Comments on 'The Party After the Party'

Absolutely loved it

felt like i was there

wish i was lol

mmmmmmmmmmm

Yeah...my dicks hard!! Write more about these two!

that was great my cock was so hard.hopefully we get to read more from you.

One of my best fantasies, this one. Well-written and hot as hell. There were some grammatical errors I saw here and there, but for the most part, it worked quite well. My ONLY complaint is that he withdrew at the last moment. Realistic, I suppose, considering the situation, but still somewhat of a let-down. Their final position, though, really made it sing for me.

And, I'll be honest, as much as I absolutely loved the storyline itself, and its brevity, I felt that it could have been a little more rounded with description. Foreplay was lacking and it would've been nice to play on the sense of smell along with the imagery.

Continue the adventure!

a real shame it was never finished i hate reading only a partial story this needs atleast two or three more chapters SO START WRITING NOW

Storytell ending.

Love to see more.

Beautiful brother and sister story.

Never in my life have I heard anyone say, "Arrgnn!!"