All Comments on 'The Party at Dana Point'

Nicely written. I grew up in the Laguna area and know first hand that their are a lot of free thinking people living in and around there. I hope you write more.

George/Anne

Northern California

Very nice story line. Wish there was more, like the wife's view and maybe one of the after together times. But done well none the less.

seemed to be a good one but suddenly the author forgot that he/she started it with the first person and then changed to third person which changed my mind about the story. I never finished it jumped to the last page to jot down these lines before I quit.

Very good story, loved it. So what if you changed the person. The first person got laid while the third person watched. No harm no foul. Thanks for sharing.