All Comments on 'The Party at Jimbo's'

I'd be more likely to get a hard-on looking at tax returns.

can't get a hard on is why she left your sorry ass for a tax accountant. Gave this story a 5 for effort

Enjoyed it.

Give this sexy young man some silky soft hair for that deliciously masculine and muscular chest. She sucked his cock -- let her lips bottom out in the lush pubes at the base of his cock. Give them more sexcapades together!

great read it was electric

There's room for a lot more stories to follow this, using Jimbo's as a center, or with Rob and Becky developing their lives. Mom could be a factor later, as well.

Meanwhile, this was a fun read. You obviously understand the travails of being in a small town with no resources and developed that very well. Rob is a real person here, but Becky needed a little more work.

Keep writing. I enjoyed "The Damned New..." series as well, although the Army as a way to end a story is a bit of a cop out. Of course, it does beat jail, for certain.

The Anonies don't have valid points to make, they're just kvetching. Kaidman's comment, while short, is accurate. I concur.

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And they arr rived happiry ever rafter.

Q.E.D.

THIS ONE GOT 4 STARS, I LIKED THE END.

..THANKS..

USAF