All Comments on 'The Passing Ch. 02'

Looking forward to more of this story.

Getting better and better. Keep goin

Yep u really do have talent so far from what I have seen

Though my suggestion would be make your stories bigger

I mean to say is only reading two pages won't make you the best writer

In Literotica cause in only two pages we don't have enough content to rate it

Higher so I hope your future CHAPTERS will be somewhat bigger I hope.

I have no doubt you have a good beginning cash on it mate

Don't let the naysayers bother you

Take care SAYONARA

I am going to write about it using some of your same characters. Don't worry though, i will submit it in the celebrities section. Thanks.

Your Interesting world got a lot more Interesting! Seriously can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!

Loving the story so far! Hope you continue to the finish.

Do you have any idea when you might be posting the next chapter in the series? The story is great so far really like the characters can't wait for the next one

I have enjoyed your story so far and I thank you for sharing it here.

this story. It's very good and I want / need to see where you will take it.

very interesting story, i look forward to reading more of it. I would like to see a longer chapter though. Hopefully you will have uploaded another chapter before long. Keep up the good work.

I hope you continue with it.

I am quite impressed with this story. I would say it is quite close to being as good as Intrepid_Fate's stories, hopefully you don'tgo and stop mid-series like he did though. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.

an awesome piece but it seems you've also bailed on it.