All Comments on 'The Path'

This story was very hard to read due to the numerous grammatical and spelling errors.

If you don't have spellcheck, or don't care to use it, then GET SOMEONE TO EDIT THE STORY FOR YOU!

yes i agree spell check and a proof reading is needed , but the story is good and probably could be fleshed out to a second chapter. an i just love people who comment with out leaving a name