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curiousonejcuriousonejalmost 11 years ago
:)

Please write more of this two ... Great story's

HlovestoreadHlovestoreadabout 11 years ago
Love your writing

I love your path not chosen stories they are great. I hope you add more stories about Alyssa and Paige.

fanficwriter1fanficwriter1over 11 years ago
NICE!

Loved the setting...been in Seville myself. You kind of skipped over the transition between them going from the plaza to dinner, though...it was like one moment they just changed locations, which was sort of confusing.

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