All Comments on 'The Penetration of Caitlin'

I would prefer punishments with vaginal penetration and devices instead of hands, but your story is, as usual, superbly written. Congratulations! Keep writing, please.

Great story and hopefully there will be more in the future

Love how vulnerable you made Caitlin. Also love how nurturing Eloise is towards Caitlin. I'm sure noticed a violation or two on the way out that's attributed to Caitlin? May her roommate "inconveniently" forget a piece of contraband in the room?

Very creative. You come up with all sorts of new and embarrassing ways to punish people while making your characters feel real.

Very interesting mix of Caitlin's vulnerability to Eloise's assertiveness. And am I getting an undercurrent of Sadism out of Eloise? I wouldn't object to Eloise getting a longer, more thorough correctional session with Caitlin.

Again, another great piece of work. The character development is, as always, what makes the story.

The act itself is in some ways fairly minor, and yet the writing around it and Caitlin's inner thoughts really make it!

Looks like I'm not the only one who published a noncon story about someone named Caitlin this week. I thought the coincidence was crazy so I checked out your story and LOVED it. I love the way you pause to soak in every moment.

Yes, superbly written as usual. The interaction between the two girls is almost sensual. Looking forward to mode.

I really enjoyed it. Like I do with all your stories! You set the scene very well. Very easy to see in my mind. Will there be a chapter 2?

Your nom de plume is SO appropriate. Judicial punishment used to mean a caning or flogging. Your stories of inventive alternative forms of correction are amazing. Sometimes the simplest punishments are the most evocative. Here we have no extended ritual or special equipment at all -( not that I don't enjoy that as well ) Simply fingers painfully inserted into a rectum. And the story works ! I go to this site frequently, each time hoping to see a new tale. Keep writing, you are talented.

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What a new & different tale!

This was very erotic & a good beat off story.

I’m definitely keeping a bookmark for this story.

Bill S.

As usual with your work, I love everything about this story: the characters, the pacing, the punishment, the inner monologues, the writing - all fantastic. I particularly liked the intimate setting of this story, turning Caitlin’s personal space into the location of her humiliation and torment. Eloise is a great character, her cruelty covered up by her winning personality. Hope to see her again, since it sounds like some of Caitlin’s hall mates could use a visit…

Eloise seems to love her job. Well done!

Good story - great setup. Love the concept of a woman being compelled to expose "that hole" for such a intimate penetration and punishment. Perhaps any further infractions would result in a more invasive violation with other objects being pushed deeper into her backside. Humiliation maybe added by her being positioned spread over a punishment horse with an intimate high definition video of her punishment taken, split screen with her spread and penetrated ass on one and her face on the other as she endures it. Enemas have also proven to be an effective deterrent to bad behavior, particularly when retention is enforced with a long thick dildo.

An unusual punishment scenario, but beautifully written descriptive text.

So unrealistic, think about the size of what comes out and while having someone's fingers being forced in may cause some minor discomfort it wouldn't be anywhere as painful as depicted. Other than that it was a pretty good story. Eloise sure did seem to enjoy her job. Having such intimate contact with young college women must have been such a great job.