All Comments on 'The Perfect Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful. Very romantic.

Written so lovely and I think it is wonderful how you concentrated on the love between them, rather than just the usual focus on sex. FIVE STARS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is the cutest, most adorable thing I've ever read here. More often than not I'm left disappointed with sister/sister stories (my favorite theme by the way). Personally I need the emotional and intimate connection between the sisters to get into the story, the sex is just a bonus to me. Most stories go from a great premise to instantly putting them in bed together without conveying their feelings and lack the emphasis of true love between them and how it came to be. This one however didn't disappoint. Well worth the read.

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I write stories about fantastic sex, that's fantastic in all senses of the word: Great - I write about mind blowing orgasms and people having the best sex they ever had, with all the women wet and the guys hard, no-one gets cramp or has a headache or can't perform. Not credibl...