All Comments on 'The Perfect End to a Perfect Day'

It's often difficult to put a new slant on a cuckold story, but you did it well. I was completely fooled by the beginning so the reveal of the second flashback was the surprise it was intended to be. I gave it 5.

I agree with sixpe. Interesting take and well written.

Thanks, sixpe. Yeah, I try very hard to find new and creative ideas to explore in my writing, but it's tough to find new ground that hasn't already been very thoroughly mined elsewhere on this site. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story.