All Comments on 'The Perfect Game Ch. 02'

I hope you are hard at work on part 3!! My wife and I have enjoyed your stories so far. Thanks

What happened to the third couple. I was looking forward to hearing about 7 in your story and it wasn't as good, leaving out the sister. I loved the first story. The second story had too much explaining about the game and not enough sex. I hope part three has more couples and the sister back

Not quite a GREAT as Ch. 01, but that's becaues we kind of knew what to expect... just like the participants. I like the way you're leaving the door open for more (Frank and Delara, weekend w/ Beth). I do hope you continue with those chapters. Keep up the good work

~choclit_tai

loved the first one part 2 not as involved needed the new couple cant wait for part 3

i have given 100% for part 1 and 2 as a whole - as others have said part 2 was not as good but it still has me dying for more

I loved the story. Part 2 was a little short, as I liked the length of part 1. Keep it comming, mate. Can't wait for the next part.

When do we get the big paty?

You can't let this great series die.

When do we get the big paty?

You can't let this great series die.

Love it so far!

Loved Pt 1. Consider Pt2 as Prolog to Pt3 so have scored it as I did Pt1. Go for it man. G-Man

I love the idea. I would love to see a part 3. Have you ever actually built the game in the story or just have it in your imagination? I would love to see a How To on building this game.

tell the rst of the story!

This is so hot. Please hurry and get the next part out keeping it as hot as the first 2.

person failing in love with his friends wife or other woman. I'm a really big fan of Sex game stories. The first part to the series was probaly the best sex game story I have read on the site. The problem with the second part is it is going down the same trail to many of the other ones go down. I mean it's a quality story. Please find another twist to throw into it. The game it's self is quality enough without him falling for Denise. Please think it over before you finish the series.

Welcome back! Please, please, please write more of this story. Please.

Oh for a fuck game like this.

Can't wait to see Beth, Frank and Delara join the fun. Also, the girls obviously want to see the Alex and Dave play together... I know that Cheryl snuck that card in the deck.

Love this series! Please write part 3....4 and keep going!

i love it...plz make ch.3

I like stories of sexual initiation where people gently willingly expand their sexual awareness and enjoyment. Your chapter 1 is one of the best I have read in the area of sexual initiation. The game is a great idea.

Your part 3 of chapter 2 is the best description of a loving, caring erotic massage which I have read on this site. Thanks for both chapters.

Now I can move on to chapter 3.

but it "doesnt hold a candle" to your first and third one!!! ;p

2 down, 1 to go, great stories. I wouldn't mind seeing this game on some sex shop shelves :)

So well written, I wish I was playing this game with you! I'm definitely going to try this out and see where it leads with a couple of friends of mine, I won't be writing about my experiences though, I'll leave that up to mind fucking experts like you :) My name is Jess and I am making my way through all your stories and loving them, I'm a mum of 2 and I like reading about realistic characters who enjoy sex as much as I do! Thanks for sharing your creativity xx

than a man that gives a good massage. Except maybe a man who invents his own sex games.

We've read some of your other stories and enjoyed them. However, my wife is really enjoying the concept of this game. Wish you sold it.

We are getting a lot of great sex out of the stories nonetheless. Please keep writing.

Really tough to beat chapter 1; this one was good and sets the stage for the next chapter- looking forward to reading #3

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Well done...

...erotic, sexy, very descriptive, and you should probably consider making this game for real to sell !

Now going to Part 3 to see what happens with the 3rd couple...

This whole series is very erotic. Still can't beat chapter 1 which was phenomenal

So even when he comes clean about designing the game, he still lies unnecessarily to his wife about it? He’s a real dirtbag, and when she leaves him (and she will, she will), he’ll deserve it.