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All Comments on 'The Perfect Girl Pt. 01'

by Mikehawk2187

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PROOF READ!!!!

Example - "... she begins to put his mouth in her cock ..."

Huh?

Mikehawk2187Mikehawk2187over 3 years agoAuthor

thanks for point that out to me. I do actually proof read my work before publishing but I guess this(Honestly kinda funny) mistake slipped past. Hope you at least enjoyed the story as a whole.

Storyteller0112Storyteller0112over 3 years ago

Eagerly awaiting Chapter 2

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I really like erotica so I thought it was time I wrote my own. I write sex stories for straight, and gay people. Regardless of your orientation, odds are there is something here for you. Any and all feedback, positive or negative, is welcome.