All Comments on 'The Perfect Pieces Ch. 03'

I hate having to wait for the next installment! With something this good, waiting for the next chapter is bordering on cruel and unusual punishment.

some kind of trouble from Tom.

There will soon be a knock on the door and an unwanted person asking for Amber?

But why can't you release all the chapters at once? Honest question, not criticism... how hard is it to post a new chapter?

Very nice pace and development. Anxious to read more.

Do you think that there is an all points out on her? Personally I know that something unpleasant has to create problems for the romance.

is going to happen. I know how your stories go sometimes. Something very bad is going to happen.

..... as I have said for your other stories, I hope you enjoy your writing as much as your readers enjoy your works.

Never gave romance much thought before. I was always work and play and family but not romance. Now I think back and wish I'd have given more. These stories are are good, they get me thinking and there is always a twist. When they were at the grocery store and that guy was watching the girl...........maybe he recognized her from a picture, somebody was looking for her? This story is going to smoothly........

keep writing!

Everyone is so focused on the dangers ahead, they missed the magic of those two kisses. Your descriptions darn near touched my own lips and my heart, returning me to first kisses from years gone by. Thank you.

This tale is off to a very good start. I sense a fox in the hen house. What is going to happen, what is going on in the mind of the store clerk? Here we sit, fat, dumb & anxious biting our nails awaiting the next episode. LP

Bitches like Tom with their small minds in small towns should mind their own business

And the suspense builds... thanks.