All Comments on 'The Perils of Mandy Ch. 03'

not a very good erotic story writer........ Need some serious help in writing skills......

Good one!

Great story without a finish. I enjoyed the writing, the characters and the drama. But, I want to know the rest of the story with John.

Thanks

I reread the story after considering why I gave it four stars when I felt that I wanted more. My reread pushed me to five stars because the ending really was powerful and I did want more but of the quality of the story.

Thanks