All Comments on 'The Perverse Japanese Game Show'

Very enjoyable and original, well written with a nice flow.

Alright, that punchline of "$5,000" Was pretty good.

Guess he'll have to go for the real thing instead, eh?

A good story that gets weighed down by the racist dialogue, you will never find any real book or script that phonetically spells out an Asian person speaking, you can just say he’s Asian your readers will do the rest

Thanks for the feedback. Especially for the one about the racist dialogue. I was curious about how to go about that. I'm quite the amateur writer so I appreciate the tip.

The father and daughter get very rich after suing the actors. In Japan, too, contracts are only effective if the contracting parties can read them in their own language. So the TV people have all made themselves a criminal offense. They will go to jail for a long time, and father and daughter will make good use of the millions they get in a lawsuit!

Stopped after the first few lines. Overtly racist dialogue ruined it for me. Seriously not cool.

It was definitely not my intention to have the dialogue offend anyone. I apologize and 1) am a beginner, and 2) know now not to do so next time.

-Cheers

I liked the dialogue. Not racists, just a stereotypical portrayal. I hardly think substituting Rs for Ls in a porn story is going to impact anyone of Japanese heritage. Toughen up people and go find a real problem to spend your time bitching about. LOL!