All Comments on 'The Phone Call Ch. 05'

very good ending to a great story

You can't stop there! Forget the paragraph about 5 years later. Grandparent instincts are way too strong to not have them involved in the continuing saga. Molly's mother will be visiting the first grandchild and suddenly realize who the other woman in the house is. Molly learned her vindictiveness at home so Grandma is going to want her own pound of flesh in this situation. Surely she will need serviced and maybe even need a revenge fuck from the hubby. Then when Grandpa shows up for his turn at visiting the youngster he too will want to get back at Monica for ruining his marriage. Might call for some serious spanking, etc. Go ahead and milk it for what it is worth!

Nice didn’t expect the ending at all.

Really glad to see this one wrapped up. Thanks!

incredibly hot and well written. Very glad you came out of your 6 year hiatus to complete this series and look forward to more.

not sure why my comment didnt register, but in case in didn't, just wanted to comment on how good a read this was, and how much i appreciate you coming back to finish it.

Great way to wrap up the series with a surprise twist. It’s rare to see well written stories with a plot on this site. The sex scenes are also wonderful and bring back fantasies from when I was a teaching assistant in my graduate school days. I’m looking forward to more of your work.

A fantastic story! Very well-constructed characters and dialog, plot and twist. As a former college student and current professor, wife and mother who's been on both ends this kind of thing in RL, I found this story, though fictional, insightfully resonating with my own exhilarating and humiliating experiences in shamefully, powerfully arousing ways, mortified at how much, now years hence, I identified with Monica in particular. You're a very astute, skilled writer.

Nicely wrapped up. 5-star series!