All Comments on 'The Photo Session'

to rushed no back ground to tell what they were like before and to tell if this was the first time they had sex and if they were haveing sex before why aren't they living together you never said if either was married or had boyfriends or girlfriends no plot no story this reads like a first draft and needs to be fleshed out and made readable

I thought the flash of the bulb had affected them some how. Like it was a libido enhancing flash that made them so horny they would fuck whoever was near them.

And then it ended and it was just a brother and sister who suddenly decided to fuck. In public. Weird..

Sure whether or not this was their first time was confusing but who cares! This scene was so hot! Please write a sequel, either about how they first had sex or how their relationship evolves into marriage and an addition or two to their next holiday pic ;)

What I particularly liked about this was that they were used to each other as lovers. We don't always need to read about the beginning: what about established relationships? So I was glad to see someone do it.

Longer isn't always better. This one was fun!