by candyman666
Summary: mixed emotions. Having read 25 of these stories I am obviously not bored, but neither am I excited. I have rated all a consistent 4 because they are technically well written, but not 5s because they are not surprising. I am not learning anything off of them. Not that everything I read has to teach me anything, but I find all the sex scenes to be similar enough and vanilla enough that I can skim through them without missing anything. Could Lew get some impact and bondage lessons to make him a more primal lover, add some passion and dominance to his relationships, maybe experiment with submission to learn what it feels like?
I have more to read, perhaps you have created some of what I am looking for. You asked here for feedback and I saw none, so I offer this snapshot midway through the series.
Kudos for your prolific production, though. Having written a half-dozen stories and published none of them here, I have great respect for the time you have invested and continue to invest!
Happy New Year!