by Storm62
thank you for posting this lovely tale i enjoyed it very much and am looking forward to reading more of your stories
I really enjoyed this story. You said in a note at the beginning that the end may not be that romantic but what could be more romantic than a man and woman still so in love after 28+ years that their daughter could see it. Thanks for sharing.
but the contrast between the single status of your bio and the depth of love expressed in your story seems to call for a story from your personal life (and, perhaps, this was).
Excellent story. All through the last page, I expected a tragedy. Instead, you ended with positive love and anticipation.
Also, your spelling, grammar and writing are correct and comfortable.
Thanks for a beautiful story about a couple in love for many years and content to do what they enjoy rather than compete in the rat race that is so important to so many. Thank you for submitting it, and it couldn't be more romantic if you tried, all the way through. truly five stars
Also anticipating tragedy, but it wasn't there, and thank you for that. Really good.
I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you Storm62 for sharing. In my opinion this is definitely a 5 Star story.