All Comments on 'The Photograph Ch. 02'

I love it, love it, love it. You really have a gift here. Thanks!

didn't like it and here's why. reinforces the stereotype of the predatory gay male - big time. okay, that's a PC thing so take it as you will. for sure lots of things on this site are not PC and i can deal but the story has to make sense. what i really thought was shallow and ill concieved was how three generations of presumably straight men could be so easily lulled into homosexual activity. most especially when the grandson realized early on what his dad and the writer were up on all those hunting trips. so was this guy some svengali? no warning bells going off when a guy grabs your cock etc. etc.? duh? atmosphere nicely evoked but otherwise this story didn't work for me at all.

Well done I had a tale or two to tell , but reading your story as made me stop and think can I do justice to my plot as you have done to yours ! A great tale well done again.

First, it was interesting to note the professional execution of the writing even from so long ago. The message has me pondering. But for me; I see a strong element of domination and submission. The domination carried over three generations...the submission willing given in each one. If this is in fact the message, it is beautifully nuanced. If this is a reasonable conclusion, then I would say that you touched on a very common (perhaps even necessary) aspect of male/male relationships. But, nothing here is crammed down the readers throat...in fact, just the opposite. I suppose if a story makes me pause and think it must be pretty good ;)