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Click here"Fuck. Baby... I'm so close... you feel too good around me, so tight..." he groaned. Never slowing down.
Priscilla moaned loudly. "I... am too... please... together. Please Mr. Holden." She gripped his shoulders, her nails digging deep in his flesh.
And it set him off. Her calling him that, her nails, her grip... he growled her name and let go as soon as he felt her walls clench and ripple around him.
She screamed and shook underneath him, while he groaned at the intensity of his orgasm, spilling inside her. Then his head shot up in panic.
"Fuck! Priscilla, I came inside you, I shouldn't have...."
But she shook her head giggling. "I'm on the pill, for hormonal reasons. Chill Mr. Holden." She smiled while he relaxed and pulled out. The both winced.
"What's with the 'Mr. Holden' again?" he asked her while zipping up and handing her the clothes.
She shrugged. "It came out like that. If it bothered you, I..." she looked away. Christopher quickly cupped her face chuckling.
"It doesn't bother me. It's kind of hot, actually." He grinned. "How do you feel, Miss. Summers, having fucked your teacher?"
She blushed furiously, but still smiled. "Better than I have in years, Mr. Holden." She hopped down the piano, finally dressed, and winced. "Maybe a little sore."
His gaze darkened for a second, but her cheerful, coy smile lit him up again. "Are you sure I didn't hurt you too much?"
She shook her head. "I'm fine Christopher." She looked at the clock. "Your next student will be here shortly."
Astonished, he too looked at the time. "Oh, I didn't notice it was that late." He circled her waist with his arms. "You are not going to run away, right? I will see you on Wednesday."
Her pale blue eyes smiled along with her lips. "Of course." She raised on her tiptoes and kissed his lips, lightly but hungrily. "See you, Mr. Holden."
She headed to the door, swaying her hips as she walked. Her hair tousled, her stockings missing, skirt and blouse still showing off her skin.
He might have started her on a dangerous track.
Amazing. I keep coming back to this romantic and sexy story time and again. Not least because I have a crush on my own piano teacher.
Keep writing. It's wonderful.
Your thoughtful, articulate style is a pleasure to read. You have a real talent for conveying the inner lives of interesting characters in all their complexity, uncertainty, and emotional weather. I really liked your description of Priscilla's performance and Chris's listening. It was moving and real. Thanks.
Lol she was conveniently on the pill. "Hormonal reasons"
Overall sexy story
Expertly written!
It seduced me with such well chosen words!! Ü
But I must say that it needs reediting! Quite a few syntax errors
and miss spellings.
Otherwise a Great story!!
All in all a good story, written well enough.
I found the typos distracting, but not so much that I couldn't finish reading it!
Proof reading before publishing would be helpful.
I liked it a lot. If you didn't because of the spelling errors and a few grammatical errors, you were missing the POINT.
So far the only ones hinting at spelling and grammar problems are those decrying "unpublished grammar critics."
There are a few errors but nothing to diminish the story. The language is a little stilted, almost as if English is second language and as a result a great deal of care went into making sure the the language was used correctly. Certainly more formal than the subject matter needs but conversational English comes with practice, practice, practice even for those for whom English is first language.
Thank you for the offering. Please keep it up. We all get better as we write more.
Very, very enjoyable story. Plot, dialogue, delicate build-up, and actions all done well and a credit to your planning.
As far as the unpublished grammar critics go, I have a personal preference to offer constructive grammar criticism in the private feed back mode. Perhaps they are so used to the crude comments that pass for conversation on Twitter that is has become ingrained to apply that behavior everywhere. It is uncivil conduct.
The spelling complaints make me shudder if those readers are getting of on your stile and grammar instead of reading it in the language of the area you live in. My feeling is that they can't write themselves. I gave you 100 out of 100 points if that is allowed.
Love Janice