All Comments on 'The Picnic'

Sweet story

Lovely story. I usually prefer the dominant t-girl stories and romantic stories aren’t my cup of tea. The length was just right. If it had run for 4/5 pages I think I would have lost interest. I’d rather have a 6/7 page story split into 3 chapters posted at the same time to maintain my interest. Only my personal view of course and other readers views will vary.

Very well thought out, written, and presented. Now if I could only find a T girl like her.