All Comments on 'The Picnic Ch. 01'

I loved it! Please don't stop!

this was exquisite...!...you have no idea how wet i am right now...the whole time i was reading this i felt like you were inside of my mind instead of hers...god, i want to be her so bad...!!!...thank you...a really great story...i can't way to read part 2 and hope there are many many more...luv, candy...

Her boss was a pig and humiliated her in public. A decent man would have fucked her brains out and would be nice to her.

This story has so far got 102 faves out of 204.8 views, which is almost 0.5 faves prr 1k views. This story an A for popularity and solid fan base.

Jelena is young and lonely and has a low self esteem.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5), ❤❤!