All Comments on 'The Pink Circle Ch. 05'

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wolfbadgerwolfbadgerover 7 years ago
great series

hope you write more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hnm

Really enjoyed the premise of this story.. But the constant drawbacks to overly describing the same power struggle sort of ruined it.. Not to mention the unrealistic amount of cum.. They're men.. Not horses.. Even still this and the first chapter where by far the best. .. The title is a bit misleading though since he never actually infiltrated the pink circle.. For half of the story they're not even mentioned.. So yeah.. Just some criticism.. Still I enjoyed. 7/10 stars for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sometimes less is better.

Over descriptive overblown overrated.

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