All Comments on 'The Pinup vs The Vet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
And she became

A divorcee as soon as the baby bump appeared, and was terminated as a volunteer at the same time for morals violations. Gerry's contract was also voidec and all past payments to his company were dunned. His business permits were all revoked as well and the media carried the story for months.

TajfaTajfaover 3 years ago

Did she give a moments thought about her husband? No conscience, no feeling of her betraying her husband? In fact apart from a very brief mention of Tim at the start he is never mentioned. So I think she was only written as married so the story could be put into this category.

Rocky62Rocky62over 3 years ago

Kind of a sudden big jump from pinup to pornshoot with very little knowledge to support her motivation to do so

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Not only did Tim marry a`skank, he married a dumb assed one.

Just another cucks jerk off dream.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

great rub out story bring on pt2 ... as for all you whiners off to the public library ya go

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 2 years ago

I liked it or most of it anyway. But Gerry didn’t really conquer an innocent housewife. He just helped with re-emergence of a sugar baby

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Proofread! Past or present tense, misspelled words, extra unnecessary words; all take away from a good fantasy.

LPCreamLPCreamover 2 years ago

Loved it, loved it. Fantastic. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

In part 2 her husband comes home with 20 copies of the photos and gets her autograph on them all as well as the uncontested divorce application affidavit

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