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bienclarbienclarabout 4 years ago
Interested to see how this develops

Feels a bit like we've missed a chapter. Starting in media res is fine, but you're gonna have to fill in a lot in Ch.02. Saw brief mention of "tactile magic" so these are wizard pirates? Or maybe pirate wizards? Either way I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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