All Comments on 'The Plague Dance Pt. 01'

Since I am a heterosexual female and wish to do none of the things your story tells me I am doing, like grabbing "your" (or any) breast/ass, I stopped at "I see you", thinking "Oh, here we go with that!".

I very much dislike this "you" format and can't wait for this fad to end. It tells readers they're doing things which they may not only not care to do, but may find actually distasteful and so really is limiting who will want to read it.

I really enjoyed this. Can’t wait to read what happens next!

Spooky! I enjoyed the style.

Don't listen to the above critique. You were clearly writing this for a certain audience and I think it plays well. Keep contributing more stories like this!

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