All Comments on 'The Plan Ch. 01'

All, please forgive the spelling mistakes, I saved two copies of the text, one edited and one not, I uploaded the unedited version and cannot now change it. I won't make this mistake again.

Work on your spelling and it would help a lot. It should be "crotch", not "crutch". And I really hope you meant "vagina", not "virginia". May want to try proofreading it first. Hope to see more of The Plan.