All Comments on 'The Pleasure Cruise Ch. 01'

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BigBeanie over 4 years ago

Really good

I like the scenario and the work you've put into developing your characters. Very interested to read where you take this next. Five stars.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Your dialogue....

.... Is really well done. It really makes the story work. The scenes are really good too but the lining scenes make it flow.

NewOldGuy77 over 3 years ago

Wow, your characters are really likeable and genuine. Good plot flow, too. Well done! 5 stars

Verbalinians over 3 years ago

You have don’t a great job getting me invested with this (non) couple. It would seem a shame to see that Sean & Lauren never get together ! That may happen in real life BUT hey this is Literotica so I can dream, right ? Looking forward to reading the next chapter !!

Gridlock over 1 year ago

The swinging scene.. omg. So funny, so sad, so true, so well done.

golasgil over 1 year ago

Thoroughly enjoying this

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Update, February 9: I'm 5,600 words into a new story that I anticipate posting as a one-off. It'll be a long read, and I'm aiming for something both more emotional and more romantic than my usual oeuvre. I've learned a long time ago never to set deadlines for myself, but the w...

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