All Comments on 'The Pleasure Cruise Ch. 04'

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NewOldGuy77 over 3 years ago

This story is so good because of the characters, and the plot is unpredictable. It keeps you on the hook wondering, "What's NEXT?"

Alys21 10 months ago

I'm disappointed with Sean. He clearly didn't like Danielle as much as he led us to believe!

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Update, February 9: I'm 5,600 words into a new story that I anticipate posting as a one-off. It'll be a long read, and I'm aiming for something both more emotional and more romantic than my usual oeuvre. I've learned a long time ago never to set deadlines for myself, but the w...

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