All Comments on 'The Pleasure Cruise Ch. 05'

Well done indeed for creating yet another amazing series that was a pleasure to both read and edit.

Can't wait for the next one!!!

You know we now will need a follow up series about the further adventures of Sean and Lauren, and a series about Danielle's new journey, right?

Very well done series!

Well done. A great series. Lots of sex and adventure whilst still having a great storyline. The for sharing it. Would love to have a follow on series

I agree with the others who say this story needs to continue. I really enjoyed it and am hoping you’ll consider continuing the story with the next adventures of the characters.

It must have been so tempting to give the reader the predictable ending. I loved it, even though I was rooting for the predictable one. Great job.

I appreciate that you were able to use one of the two ideas I sent you! Feel free to bounce anything my way to mill over. Great read! Thoroughly enjoyed how you tied everything thing up but still felt room to let the story live another day.

Kind of like the last episode of Game of Thrones - not what I was expecting/hoping for, but it I was in enrapt attention the whole time, and sorry it's over. These 5 chapters were an excllent read.

One of the best stories I've read on Literotica. Thank you for this amazing work.

This is my first time commenting to a story in Literotica

But I should say this was the best I read around here

If anyone’s made it to the end of this and is interested in what happens next, I wrote another story about characters in this one called “A New Allison”. It takes place immediately after this one ends, and you can find it in my profile.

That was great - compelling characters, nicely paced, and a joy to read. Nice job.

Wow....

The whole series is very well written...

Great read!

A wonderful story that kept me totally engrossed throughout.

This deserves further stories exploring several sub plots in this one - Danielle's new life, Sean and Lauren, Allison and the girls during the wedding. I'd also recommend a crossover - where one group meets the other for a weekend of debauchery.

Thanks for a great read. I know you must get many comments to extend the plot or add to the series, however I am just grateful that you have written what you have. Thanks for that.

Thanks so much. Loved these characters. Your dialog, pacing, and story are so compelling.

Absolutely one of the best reads--just the right mix of story and sex---Kudos

I absolutely loved this story, I literally couldn't put it down. I was enthralled with the relationships and the women in his life. The characters were natural and honest while being sensual and engaging. I love your work and will read everything you've out.

Great story! Different to what I'd usually read, too. Keeping an eye out for more.