All Comments on 'The Plot Thickens'

You are a great writer, you just need to formulate a complete story before posting again. Everyone gave you a generous pass for your first story, but now you need to give us substance.

For teaser.

What was this supposed to be?

Perhaps re-post it over on the Non-Erotic section.

I couldn't help but think That Sam was going to suddenly walk in during the middle of the love making scene. That would have been interesting - LOL!

Just read the whole series, plus this one, and seems mom n daughter have some explaining to do since he's fixed yet both end up pregnant

Getting fixed is no fun.

How is someone supposed to knock up both mother and daughter, to give Michael younger brothers and sisters.