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Click hereDuring Dinner - Dinner will be served at 6:45pm. When ready, ring the bell and announce dinner. Lead everyone into the dining room. Refresh drinks. You are not eating with us. While we eat, prepare the poker table with cards, ashtrays, and dealer button. Come around at about 7:15pm to check drinks and needs. Find a bite in the back if you're hungry, it could be a late night. At 7:45, be sure that the plates have been cleared and the caterers are wrapping up. Offer after dinner drinks and bring around the box of cigars.
The Game Starts - At 8pm, invite us to continue our evening at the poker table. Stay to deal the first hour. Once the clock strikes 9pm, announce the last hand of the first round. Once everyone has added their ante, explain our arrangement and your duties for the evening. That will be the last hand you deal for us. Then add your first envelope to the pot and deal the hand. After the first round, I expect you to be dressed in servant attire every time you come around to refresh drinks.
Envelopes - You in control of what you write on the notes. There should be four in total, each with an increasingly better 'prize'. You already know what I expect of you. I trust you will get creative and show my guests a great time. I trust that you not disappoint me.
BD
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoIt was a very good start to your story. It was very comprehensive and flowed really well. I did find a couple of things that I thought were odd, like her being punished for expressing her fears/ concerns regarding the upcoming poker game? That just seemed really bizarre. I know trust is important but it just seems bizarre that she was punished for a genuine concern, it made him seem really cold and uncaring. The other odd thing was her talking to herself in the third person?
I noticed that this seems to be a DD/ LG relationship, I know a lot of people derive a great deal of pleasure from that kind of relationship but it’s really really not my thing so I’ll bow out from here.
Good luck with your writing.
Tess (UK)
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoGoing straight to page 2 after that scenesetter....
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoMy Master has considered having a party like this for his friends several times. You have captured my every emotion about the prospect, both pro and con. Very well done! I look forward to reading chapter 2!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoExcellent writing for a first effort. The sub's nervousness about the evening and her interplay with her Dom/boss are a welcome change of pace from the usual uber-sub, and shows how uneasily such a relationship builds. The instruction sheet was a nice touch, giving us a foreshadowing of future events and showing the nature of the Dom. I'm looking forward to seeing how the evening progresses.
FASfanalmost 7 years ago... if you can write a story like this as your first attempt! Very well done, stealth311, and welcome to Literotica. I am looking forward to reading much more soon. Five star!
