All Comments on 'The Poker Game Pt. 01'

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ShadoeMedicShadoeMedicover 12 years ago
MORE!!

Can't wait for the rest!!!

Sharky_RSharky_Rover 12 years ago
As Promised...

Yes, I know there is not Group Sex or Bondage in this chapter... But it is coming.

Originally, I had not intended to make this story as long as it has become. Hopefully you will find it worth the wait.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
If completed it may be 5 stars.

However, it is not complete, Therefore, 1*.

max052max052over 12 years ago
Nearly speechless

I am completely awe-struck by your attention to detail. Your writing reminds me of the detective novels from the 1950's (yes, I read a few) Your style is pure genius, your pace perfection. Keep writing, I'll read everything you come up with.

max052

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Maybe With "New Math"

I'll be able to figure out how you developed a five ace deck of cards, since i've never experienced a Texas Hold-Em Game with wild cards in it. When you have queens over aces full (3 q over 2 a), how do you find 3 more aces to complete aces over queens full???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
No need for new math, just logic

He had Ace/Queen. If the flop was to go Queen, Queen, Ace, Blank, Blank. You would than have Queens Over Aces. If the opponent had pocket Aces than he would have Aces over Queens and you would lose. 4 Aces and 3 Queens needed for this scenario, so it is clearly possible

loved the attention to detail in the story. Looking forward to part 2.

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