by tv46
This deserves to be made into a Skinemax movie! It's got the perfect pacing, plenty of sexy dialogue, funny plot twists (in a good way), and enough hot action to keep me reading this set all day long.
Great story line, nothing as hot as an anal gang-bang followed by a nice DP, DEFINATELY need more.
Congratulations for a great story line. One of the best I have read. If only you could add some real, dirty swear words to fall from the fucking wives and husbands to make them nasty and hotter....Do consider.