All Comments on 'The Policeman's Helmet'

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HarleyFatboy1HarleyFatboy1over 12 years ago
Fabulous Start

I really enjoy your writing and story telling style. What a wonderful fantasy to make a man perform.

You definitely have a mind for erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great

was a motorcycle police officer for 20 years women do love to have sex with men in uniform.They will even commit minor offenses just so you will stop them,then the seduction begins.It was a very enjoyable job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Dear Author, nice job on a first time effort. Good story line, nice but limited character description hopefully to be expanded upon as the story progresses. Thank you for the little escape read. jntiques

roveroneroveroneabout 5 years ago
Hot! Really liked it!

Fun characters

flirtywife63flirtywife63over 4 years ago
Loved it!

Really enjoyed reading this. It had everything.......humour, sexiness and a man in uniform!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very well written and looking forward to the next chapter.

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I have found my writing chops again and am busy working on a story series that is set during the pandemic in 2020. Part one is published on Smashwords under the name 'D.H. Amsterdam, ' which I will post here as soon as I have part two published there. Follow me for release not...