by partwolf
I have been patiently waiting for this installment. And boy did you not let me down. I always look forward to seeing one of your stories. This one was no different. I can’t wait to read more of the adventures of “Sharkbait and her family.
You keep me engaged and I can’t wait for your new work. Well done on another awesome story giving joy in these troubling times. Take care and again awaiting your next work.
Your usual cliffhangers not withstanding EXCELLENT AS USUAL ! I have read you since the beginning ,with only a few with holdings. My only problem is the wait between chapters . Two of my other favorite authors have quit producing, one do to open heart surgery , the other due to compilations due to Agent Orange , they are FAT_DAD , & RECHICKER . The of you make up my favorites . I have some minor authors that are fun (for the fill in) , so needless to say I'm an old fart who likes GREAT WRITING !
CHEERS & THANKS DOE THE READ
txcracker
Love the story. It's not the usual sex on a stick. I for one didn't miss the sex. Kind of sorry the story ended hope you got another in your mind. Looking forward to your next story.
Not one to write much but you did it again. A great story keeping us wanting more and then it ends with so much more to tell.
I do hope at some time you will come back and continue some of your stories..
Enjoyed this series very much! Hope you continue!
As always I enjoyed it. Now the question PW is, will there be a book 2, or are you taking us on a new adventure? Inquiring minds want to know.
ELS
I about sh*t myself when I read that Leo died!! You are cruel. But I totally understood when I finished reading about it. You have excellent storytelling abilities and should think about a career as a writer of Paranormal/Romance/Mysteries. This was an exceeding wonderful story and I can't wait to read more of your stories. Please keep writing and I'll keep reading!! I loved it!!
Just an outstanding story. Great characters and the story line is very compelling. Thanks.
Lived in KC 65 years and Arthur Bryant's sucks smokestack is Much better
The paraphrasing of Jaws was very apt.
Thank you for sharing your imagination and stories.
Tess (UK)
A small nit to pick.
Aircraft carriers are huge but not 9 football fields. American football fields are 100 yards long. The Lexington is 872 feet long overall and 820 feet at the waterline. The modern (US) supercarriers are over 1000 feet in overall length.
Been bing reading great storys. Keeping me up because dont want to put down ..love the ocasional plugs f or leines. Have u ever tried 45th parrell or border burbon from new richmond WI. 😎
I’m sorry but this last part has been dumb as shit. The Anthony boy should told Brent Leo is alive so he could tell Liv to stop running. These wolves are all cowards and pieces of shit. It makes no sense to me trying to see this in reality. We will just keep telling them he’s dead. At least get them to stop until Leo’s trial is done. Whatever. Wolves are all the same. Vampires are better
Now you just trying force drama with Liv falling. It’s great story without forcing things like this.
Actually, Liv falling feels quite natural - pregnant + stressed out + shock. And hitting one's head in the process is more likely than I'd like to think.
The story isn't perfect, but it is very good.
Enjoyed the story as a whole, but thought the last part of this story was more like a travel log and a way to show off the authors knowledge of good places to eat. Still good enough to get all five stars.
Bravo to the author. The story is very well written and characters were all fully fleshed out. I loved it! ♥
Great story, but that corrupt council got away far too easy. The way they wanted to kill Leo without a proper trial for being a rogue at the same time as the trial made it clear they had declared him a proper alpha should have had consequences. Can't have a council that arbitrarily gets to decide someone is a rogue and then kill him.
I do like how this story contained a lot less of the extreme violence Partwolf tend to include in his other stories. Not every antagonist has to be a sadistic rapist.