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feliciacosminafeliciacosminaalmost 16 years ago
Nice

Very nice story! Keep writing, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
For fuck's sake..

get an editor. Yor text is full of spelling mistakes and the tenses are just not right.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Agreed

An editor is a must.

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