All Comments on 'The Powers of Beauty: Alt Version'

more please

I'm hard pressed to say which one i like more... although I think i like the original one more just because the seduction was almost more unexpected =)

Loved both though!

Like the original, This alternate version reveals all the stimulating details of how the lovers are dressed and become extremely aroused. Glenda is much more aggressive in exploring Veronica's body; her burning lust is not only to receive gratification, but to give it as well. The description of the reaction of Glenda's body during her first orgasm leaves the reader very aroused and with a deep yearning for sexual release. Glenda compels her beautiful young lover, Veronica, to abide with her permanently. In this version, Veronica avoids being placed under the spell of the magic potion, but succumbs to the more powerful spell of Glenda's sexy body.

After having read the first version for the second time. I'm rather impressed by the way you expanded in retelling the same story. And how you omitted small details and yet enlightened us with adding other details. With that I'm giving parts 1-2

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses and 5🌟 's.

What wonderful recreation.