All Comments on 'The Predator Ch. 01'

Depends? Seriously? What a major mood-killer. Awful.

I -REALLY- loved the reality angle on this one. Yes the Depends and the weight. 5 Stars. And I am hoping you have a ch2.

Older fat girls are fun. Had one who swore she had never swallowed before@@ :) Great story that brought back some memories.

Ah, the joys of a woman of substance! A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here (that I would read, sorry not into scat!) I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.