All Comments on 'The Prefect Woman'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Prefect != Perfect ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Typo in the title - should be Perfect.

cageysea9725cageysea9725almost 3 years ago

I knew from the title I was in for the treat of reading a story that the author had spent a zero amount of proof reading on. I love to find those authors whose work ethic is shown in the amount of attention paid to not caring if their writing is readable or not.

I was not disappointed.

Anyone not interested in doing the required work to make their writing the best they can, should avoid the work of typing altogether, and just not do it.

Ironman52Ironman52almost 3 years ago

Nice. I didn't notice it was a mom son thing until the end. I read by author not category so it was a pleasant surprise ending (for me). Kinda hard to change title isn't it. If you can do it; do it sooner rather than later.

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 3 years ago

Too bad she had her tubes tied

MafenMafenalmost 3 years ago

What is this crap? When an author can't even get the title of their story right, it's time to worry. But that was the high point! It just got worse from there.

Neither literate or erotic. Total waste of time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please fix title

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

KGC: more than a little harsh.

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 3 years ago

Screw perfect! It was a cute 5 star story including the "Mom" twist at the end.

Cheers

SAGE

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 3 years ago

Loved the sex but wished it was longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

44EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE????

WTF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
COW TITS!

GROSS!!! get a breast reduction!

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

What the f***. AA++

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