All Comments on 'The Present'

Your story was going along fine until the dad got home from work and asked about your birthday which you indicated was on a Tuesday but you were getting your present on a Saturday. Plus you then mentioned how the dad wouldn't probably be up for sex since it was the middle of the week. Another lapse in the time line. Otherwise a good story that only needs a little proofreading and editing of other minor issues.

I agree you need to always proofread your story at least twice after your done. Then I suggest using an editor to catch spelling and grammar.

I just wish he came in her pussy more! Other than that - it was HOT!!!

Give us a break, just read the damn story, enjoy and say thank you..

stopped reading when he said pussy i need to fuck mom .

anny mom would hit him in the face & throw him out

stuppid you started like that!!!!!!!!

I thought it was hot. To the anon who stopped reading and said the mom should have thrown him out for saying he wanted to fuck her, what do you think was going to happen you stupid twat?? It's a fucking porn story!!

Maybe his mom agreed a little to fast. But other than that, the story was fucking hot. How about a sequel? Christmas or something.

Is this a repeat or a very near copy of one I've allready read.

Mom gives her boy Alex the best present a mother ever can--the warm hairy hole between her thighs the kid came out of.

I was rock hard from the first paragraph till the end. Fucking awesome story. Just wish the the end would have hinted that the mom was not stopping after just one day...

Absolutely incredible story! I encourage you to write a sequel, maybe for his 20th birthday? Would love to see more from this storyline.

Lucky kid, wish this was a normal part of our culture. I would have loved to use and abuse my mom at that age.... and then there's my sister............

PLEASE ADD A SEQUEL. This story was the 2nd best one on this site

You should write the next capter

Nice.....

Great story, well put together and well presented.

I agree with the others, continue this one or try another, ill keep an eye out either way.

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Please write a part 2 for this.

Really great story. I know it came to a good ending, but I would love to read a sequel to it.

This story and Home Run are the guaranteed one shot dead shot faps on this site.

Perfect even tempo and hit the show-dont-tell sweetspot.

Alwayswantedto will be the all time marathon session expert, thehumpman produces lovely and staccato quick shots, but these two stories are the perfect middle distance gems.

I do not know about this story. He shows no respect nor love for his mother. Per story "thinking about how he was going to use & abuse my mother". "great to treat her like a slut"; and "only wants sex with mother". At 19, parents wonder if he wants a bile or gaming laptop? Mothers, wives, women, sluts and whore should be treat as ladies until they prove they are not.

She should propose this present again for his next birthday and also come up with a few extra things he is allowed to do.

Bever to late to write a sequel.

Her Mother after a month begins to flirt and tease. Then it evolves into heavy petting and eventually her sly, sexy smile nails him on the dining room table. Let the fun begin.

Needs a sequel where he asks it again for his next birthday, this time wanting to anally creampie her and impregnate her

Please do a sequel, this is amazing. Preferably with pee involved.

One of the best stories on here, more please!

Love this, please make a sequel!

This definitely needs a Christmas edition.

Best story you've done, love it!

More please!

best story on the site!