All Comments on 'The Pretender Ch. 08'

This comment relates to the whole story so far. I'm really enjoying Michael and Daniel. I thought that I was the only writer who had tackled the religious issue and it's great to find an author who thinks along the same lines as I do. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment.

WESTLEY! !!! STOP COCKBLOCKING AND GET YOUR OWN!

I don't know if Daniel will be strong enough to stand up to being outed yet. How far are his parents from there? Wondering if they could find out this way. I really hope you don't have them fight giving Westley a chance. Michael has been so patient that I can't see him easily giving up on Daniel. I did wonder in the beginning when they were already 'dating' and agreed to talk once every few weeks! weeks? lol. Glad they are closer now. I like the pace. You manage to cover a longer period of time without it feeling like you're skipping too much. It feels like a natural progression.

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Daniel seem so mature in the way he handles his feelings for Michael and the competition with Westley. The sex was gentle but very hot. I loved Michael's quiet reaction to getting Daniel off because it was so real.

I think I love Westley - "Just give me a fucking reason!"

That should keep Daniel on his toes ey, lol.