All Comments on 'The Priestess of the Spire Ch. 01'

by jvolante

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This has a really interesting start, please keep going.

I like your writing style, easy to follow with enough detail. I dig it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You've done a fine job of building dramatic tension. I am half convinced that Gar is headed into an adolescent male's harem fantasy but equally convinced that Gar is about to experience all things terrifying. Well done!

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