All Comments on 'The Princess' Wedding Night'

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nthusiasticnthusiastic8 months ago

Amazing that this was once considered normal, binding a young girl to a grown man in marriage. You’d think her mother, at least, would have had ‘the talk’ with her, but perhaps this was how it had happened for her mother, too. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Enjoy your writing - keep it up!

julianmarquezjulianmarquez8 months ago

This was great, loved how you set the situation and her reactions.

Time9870Time98708 months ago

Okay first and foremost decent story. However her mother would have had a talk with her long ago when she first had her monthly. She would have known all about how a man puts a baby inside of her. So that part really doesn't track. Even if her mother died before that when she started someone would have told her about it. Furthermore people talk in court. She is with child look how round she is etc etc. She might have also bear witnessed about the first time from another wedding

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hi im m.a (any prounouns) and sometimes i write filth most of my content has to do with breeding and/or virginity. expect to find a lot of historical settings too i'm new to posting my work online & this is just a silly little hobby i do in my free time when i'm not working on...