All Comments on 'The Princess's Servant'

by LambentNorth

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falcon29falcon29over 4 years ago
Slightly Disappointed

I had originally thought she'd use him as a 'feet-first dildo', or stick him in head first so he could lick the walls of her vagina. This is good, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Exceptional!

I absolutely loved this piece of writing! I will be keeping an eye out for more of your work. Hope to be able to read more soon. Keep it up!

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Very interesting...

... I never thought she would make him a woman, just use him as an alive lover that would be able reach places a do things...

Oh well this could be great training; learning first hand how a woman likes to be pleased.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Huh

I liked this quite a lot. It's rare to find consensual stories like this that don't have cruelty or bad endings sprinkled in. Making it clear that the changes, while they could be repeated, are very much not all Bren has in his future was really nice. No skeevy people alluded to, and the worst consequences are being sent home. Very nice work; thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very sweet.

I really appreciate you incorporating these fetishes into a story full of kindness and cuteness. That's very hard to find. I'll be eagerly awaiting what comes next. Hopefully a love story? :)

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 3 years ago

Well done, I really enjoyed this story, it was very sweet and tender.

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